Task E, MC Summarizing & Substituting for Cohesion and Coherence, Boys Falling Behind
Good writers often substitute words or summarize their previous sentences for cohesion and coherence. This makes the writing comfortable and easy to follow for the reader. Read the excerpt for each question then select the best substititions for it.
When you have finished the exercise, read the entire article and analyze how the writer achieves cohesion and coherence by using the strategy/strategies you have learned in this lesson:
"If differences in the performance of males and females in the general population are small, why do more males end up at the top in science and mathematics - and, at the same time, more males appear at the bottom of the barrel in schools, labeled as impaired and assigned to special education classes?"
According to Kleinfeld (1998, p. 20) the answer to this question is...
According to Kleinfeld (1998, p. 20) the answers to these questions are...
According to Kleinfeld (1998, p. 20) the answer to these questions are...
According to Kleinfeld (1998, p. 20) the answers to these question is...
'...greater variability among males means that more academic stars, those at the extreme right end of the normal curve, are apt to be males.'
But this variability also means...
But this varability also means...
But these variabilities...
But those variabilities...
Females now take as many high school classes in mathematics and science as males do.
This narrowing gender gaps...
These narrowing gender gaps...
Those narrowing gender gaps...
This narrowing gender gap...
One of the more controversial issues addressed by the AAUW (1992) report was based on "call out" research, i.e., a study of the extent to which boys vs. girls call out answers to questions which teachers pose to the class.
The report conclude...
The article concluded...
The report concluded...
The article concludes...
One of the more controversial issues addressed by the AAUW (1992) report was based on "call out" research, i.e., a study of the extent to which boys vs. girls call out answers to questions which teachers pose to the class. The report concluded that boys called out answers more frequently than girls. Further, they reported that teachers' typical reaction to boys was to listen to the comment, while girls were usually told, "Please raise your hand if you want to speak" (p. 68).
These researches...
This dramatic finding...
These dramatic findings...
Those dramatic findings
A 1999 U.S. News and World Report article reported that, at an increasing rate, college-student populations in all types of postsecondary institutions have higher proportions of women, while young men are tending towards lucrative early employment and economic independence.
The article points out...
The report suggest...
The report suggests...
The article point out...
Kleinfeld (1998, p. 29) also emphasized that at the postsecondary level " ...a gender gap exists and is increasing.
But these gender gaps clearly favour females.
But this gender gap clearly favours females.
But this gender gaps clearly favours females.
But these gender gap clearly favour female.
"In 1995,...women won 55 percent of the bachelor's degrees and 55 percent of the master's degrees. Among African-Americans, the gender gap in favor of females is far larger. In 1995, African-American men won only 36 percent of bachelor's degrees and only 34 percent of master's degrees.
The shortchanged groups are not female - it is...
The shortchanged groups are not female - they are...