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To take a look at (it's a phrasal verb) investigate the problem of declining numbers of
visitors to Hong Kong, we decided to do ('do' is too
general) conduct a
really big (it's an informal quantifier) large-scale survey. |
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We made (it's too general) designed a questionnaire and
handed it out (it's a phrasal verb) distributed it to 2,000 people. |
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We did this because right now (informal expression) currently
we don't (apostrophes are too informal) do not have any
reliable hard data on why tourist numbers are declining. |
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There's (apostrophes are too informal) There is not much
(it's an informal quantifier) little information available either on what might
bring them back to Hong Kong. |
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The return rate for the questionnaire was really bad
('really' is an informal quantifier and 'bad' is too general) very disappointing at
only 13% but this figure should provide a firm enough basis for talking
about (it's a phrasal verb) discussing why tourist numbers are going down
(it's a phrasal verb)
declining. |
